Incredible story. I could really feel the despair and hopelessness in Kaon. You did a great job showing us why the inhabitants behave like they do, and having Prowl, the outsider, really highlighted that great divide between Kaon and the outsiders. It was great seeing Jazz break out, but bittersweet that he realized that he'd lost Ricochet.
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
timeasmymeasure
no subject
Date: 2013-09-09 12:25 am (UTC)