Yes, I think Trypticon would've noticed what Mirage delivered. Not Mirage himself, but that he had *left* something.
You're 90 per cent on the right track. In chapter 5 the hints with Ravage are probably what you're still missing, but well... they're only hints. What amazed me wasn't that you guessed *everything* (which is nearly impossible, I admit), but that you just saw through the story to the moral questions and tales behind it.
Question one: Part/ part. Some know, some not. Some suspect. In the next chapter, you'll discover someone who knows. And someone who didn't. ^^
Mirage and Hound: Yes, both knew what was inside. Both volunteered aeons ago.
I will probably update Wednesday evening (Central Europe time).
Yeah... they saved much, but they also know how much they destroyed. Not a good position.
I really, really hope you like the next chapter and especially chapter 10. >.> I rewrote it without joking 5 times and drove a few people crazy with it.
Any way, my offer stands still. Any question at the end you want answered, I will write a oneshot for you.^^
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Yes, I think Trypticon would've noticed what Mirage delivered. Not Mirage himself, but that he had *left* something.
You're 90 per cent on the right track. In chapter 5 the hints with Ravage are probably what you're still missing, but well... they're only hints. What amazed me wasn't that you guessed *everything* (which is nearly impossible, I admit), but that you just saw through the story to the moral questions and tales behind it.
Question one: Part/ part. Some know, some not. Some suspect. In the next chapter, you'll discover someone who knows. And someone who didn't. ^^
Mirage and Hound: Yes, both knew what was inside. Both volunteered aeons ago.
I will probably update Wednesday evening (Central Europe time).
Yeah... they saved much, but they also know how much they destroyed. Not a good position.
I really, really hope you like the next chapter and especially chapter 10. >.> I rewrote it without joking 5 times and drove a few people crazy with it.
Any way, my offer stands still. Any question at the end you want answered, I will write a oneshot for you.^^