I'm happy that you liked it. :) It was my first try at a crime story and written within just two weeks... I'm happy that Blip wasn't obvious.
Yes, most didn't want to contemplate Jazz as the real killer. It was probably a huge distraction for most readers. ;)
The epilogue wasn't planned, funnily enough, it just happened. The story wanted it, and Turnout deserved a chance to shine at least for a second. (and of course, I'm a sucker for happy ends)

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