I really like this one, probably even more so because I love how you depict Starscream and Skyfire in general.
Here I liked most the raw emotions, Starscreams destruction of the room, his anger and fear, hiding underneath it. - How horrible, to target one bondmate to kill the other *shudders* Even more so, I like that Starscream - well, for being himself ^_^" - keeps a level head and leaves dealing with the attackers to Optimus; for Skyfire. And the message is great: love that changes us, no matter who we are/were. Nicely done!
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Date: 2013-02-27 04:59 pm (UTC)Here I liked most the raw emotions, Starscreams destruction of the room, his anger and fear, hiding underneath it. - How horrible, to target one bondmate to kill the other *shudders* Even more so, I like that Starscream - well, for being himself ^_^" - keeps a level head and leaves dealing with the attackers to Optimus; for Skyfire. And the message is great: love that changes us, no matter who we are/were. Nicely done!
I'm looking forward to the next part!