Hm... I would have actually liked it if Prowl and Jazz could have found - and maybe fought? - Glint before it is revealed that Prowl is spying for Optimus... I find Prowl a bit too naive in here, though, in the end.
I liked it very much, but I think the ending is perhaps a bit rushed due to the deadline you needed to keep to?
Another little typo: Alarge/A large computer stood here...
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Date: 2013-09-04 08:57 am (UTC)I liked it very much, but I think the ending is perhaps a bit rushed due to the deadline you needed to keep to?
Another little typo: Alarge/A large computer stood here...