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Lies and murders

Written for: prowlxjazz the anniversary challenge 2012

Day: 9
Prompt: Doppelganger
Beta: Starfire201 and taralynden (Two heroes who betaed everything despite headaches, storms and lack of time!)
Verse: AU, G1
Rating: PG-13
Words: 22,240 (completed)
Warnings: none
Summary: A deactivated mech is found in an alley and a witness describes Jazz. Though Prowl gives Jazz an alibi. The trouble - he lies.




Epilogue


Turnout waited patiently in the hall of the Autobot headquarters, knowing that they would soon come straight to him. It was only a matter of time. Behind him the big entrance opened and closed for various Autobots and he ignored that more and more recognised him and stayed to find out why he was here. Turnout wasn't bothered by it.

This time, he wasn't officially here because of his job, though in his life somehow everything was always related to that. He didn't want it any other way. He loved the hunt for a criminal, the challenge to find and puzzle together the hints and the satisfied warm glow in his spark when justice was served.

This time, though, the glow had been dimmer when he thought about Blip, the sweet, spark-broken mech he had gotten to know and like. Blip, the spark-killer, whose own guilt and madness had led to a horrifying death. He hadn't been able to forget the moment when he had entered the apartment and pink Energon had been everywhere, Prowl lying on the floor surrounded by medics and then Jazz, or someone that had looked like him... Analysis of the core had confirmed that it was Blip. Poor mechformer, driven insane by his own ability. A sad fate.

And so, to forget and to chase away the images, he had reviewed the data files created on the case, had organised them and archived them. Just to find himself with Jazz and Prowl's description of the original alibi in hand and to read it again and again...

Which had now led him here to the entrance hall, where he waited quietly for the two Autobot's shift end.

When they exited the elevator, Turnout smiled. Of course, they were together. Another clue for his theory.

“A nice orn,” greeted Turnout the two, who looked at him with barely concealed suspicion. He couldn't blame them after the events of the last deca-orn. “Do you have a breem for me?”

They shared a look, then nodded. “Of course,” said Prowl. “Has something happened?”

“Oh no, you don't need to worry. But do you remember our last conversation, Prowl? It was about the alibi.”

The wings of the Praxian tensed, barely perceptibly. “Yes.”

Jazz shifted closer to his friend as if to offer support and Turnout filed it away as another clue. “I told you then that I would find proof that your alibi was false. Of course, now that it has been proven that Blip was the murderer, it was naturally assumed that the alibi was truthful.” He smiled. “But I suppose I was curious and checked both of your testimonies again.” Curiosity had always been Turnout's biggest asset and sometimes his curse. He just couldn't let things rest. “I calculated the stated time on the files; comparing them and calculating it again, I found one flaw...”

“A flaw?” asked Jazz. “Are you saying we both lied?”

“Well, not exactly,” Turnout amended. “But you didn't tell us the whole truth. Your alibi has a hole of nearly one joor. A joor for which both of you tried to cover up through extending other conversations and activities.”

Turnout could feel how the anticipation in the hall skyrocketed. Every mech wanted to know one thing, what had Jazz and Prowl tried to hide despite the high risk? The Enforcer enjoyed the crackling suspense behind him, the silence as no one dare to move. This, the hunt and then the thrill of closing in on the mystery was what he loved.

To his surprise, neither Jazz nor Prowl seemed very shocked that he knew. Instead, the saboteur smiled at his friend and said: “Maybe we should just tell them?”

“Now?” asked Prowl, and flicked a doorwing in amusement.

“No time like now...”

“If you insist.” The tactician looked the mechs assembled in the hall and then back at the Enforcer. “You're right, something did happen.” He stopped for a moment, and Turnout would have bet his last promotion that it was only to increase the dramatic moment. “In that joor, Jazz decided to ask me if I would want to bond with him.”

Stunned silence. Despite the rumours of them being sparkmates, no one had expected the two famously-secretive and private mechs to give that ultimate trust to anyone, not even to each other. Turnout, though, used the moment and asked: "And what was your answer?"


Prowl smiled. “I wanted to think about it for an orn, but then things happened... and I could only give Jazz the answer four orns ago.”

“And?”

Jazz stepped forward and for once Turnout didn't doubt for a klick that the radiant joy on his face was real. “He said yes.” Jazz grinned. “We've now been bonded for three orns.”

“And it was the best decision of my life,” said Prowl quietly and hugged the saboteur from behind.

Turnout stared. How they could have all doubted the love between that pair, and debated for orns whether they were more than friends or not, was now a mystery to him. Behind him the Autobots started to clap and cheer and he slowly joined in.

If the Enforcers had known about the deep connection between those two, they would have given far less credit to Prowl's alibi. Which had probably been the first reason to hide it, besides the fact that it probably came naturally to them to lie about it after hiding their love over vorns and through vicious war. And then, when the orns passed and Jazz was already in prison, Prowl's confession would have only made him even more of a suspect. Maybe they would even have even tried to pin him down as a confidant. No, their decision to hide it had been logical.

In front of him, Jazz now turned in Prowl's arm and whispered, “The best decision of my life was to ask you for a dance on that party in Tarn...”

Prowl laughed softly, and then they were kissing as if there was no greater treasure in the universe than the bot in their arms.

Turnout smiled and clapped harder and rejoiced with the crowd, as he slowly felt the glow of satisfaction in his spark.

Finally, the case was closed.


END


~ ~ ~~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Blip
is a Decepticon from G1 and quite insane. He claimed to be a Sparkeater among other great and distrubing titles and Magnus arrested him. End of his story.

Axer

is a Decepticon from the G1. He appeards shortly in the Dreamwave and IDW comics. In Dreamwave, he was a bounty hunter and assassin. In the IDW comics, he slightly modified his appearance to infiltrate the Autobots (no mechformer) and tried to kill Optimus Prime.

Backbeat
is an Autobot from G1 and appeared in the IDW comic Spotlight: Hot Rod and Spotlight: Double Dealer. He was a member of Hot Rod's unit, an explosive expert and was murdered by Dealer – who can change his body, is an infiltrator and Decepticon spy. It was fate, Backbeat.


Turnout, Hosepipe and Tumbler – Original Characters.



Thanks for all for kept reading until the end! :)



Date: 2012-09-09 01:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thalanee.livejournal.com
Wow... just wow!

This was amazing, once I started reading I simply couldn't stop until I had reached the end!

All the little detaisl made this story perfect.

Now excuse me, while I go and reread it again ;D

Date: 2012-09-10 09:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silberstreif.livejournal.com
Thanks! :) I had fun with all the little details, some who were hints, some who were just for fun and some who were thoughts I had for a long time... I wish you fun with the rereading!

Date: 2012-09-09 01:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wicked3659.livejournal.com
This was great! Like a good book I couldn't put down :D I initially thought back beat was the killler but then it fell into place with blip really well done :3

Date: 2012-09-10 09:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silberstreif.livejournal.com
Thank. I wrote this in my 'old' fanfiction style, which I abadoned two years ago for experimentation (and because fanfics in that style always grow thrice as long as I expect them to).
And thanks for telling me your guess. :) I've had some 'test-readers' who I asked the same question about who the killer is, and one of them answered Backbeat as well. The other guesses were Turnout, Magnus, Prowl, Jazz... no one got Blip right.

Date: 2012-09-10 09:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wicked3659.livejournal.com
That nobody guessed right means it is a good detective/thriller story :3

Date: 2012-09-10 09:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silberstreif.livejournal.com
I take it like this, yes. ^.^

Date: 2012-09-09 02:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starsheild.livejournal.com
This was amazing. I am going to have to go back and read it again because I know there were details I missed along the way because I wanted to get to the end and find out what happened!

Date: 2012-09-10 09:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silberstreif.livejournal.com
Thanks for commenting! I hope you've fun rereading it. There are some details that can be easily missed on the first read. Well, at least I know that I would have missed them...

Date: 2012-09-09 05:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sakon76.livejournal.com
That. Was an AWESOME story. I was kept guessing at every turn! Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us.

Date: 2012-09-10 09:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silberstreif.livejournal.com
Thanks! It was really fun to write it. It came to me as a nearly complete idea. I've to admit it was my intention to keep you all guessing and guessing until the moment Blip comes in and is so very strange...

Date: 2012-09-09 06:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mmouse15.livejournal.com
What a terrific and enthralling story! You did a great job keeping the tension up and weaving a complex story - I was reading as fast as I could to get to the end and find out whodunit!

Date: 2012-09-10 09:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silberstreif.livejournal.com
Thank you! The story came to me as a nearly complete idea... when I was on a five-hour drive back from my holiday. I used the two last hours of the drive to work it out and then I simply wrote it down and hoped that it wasn't too obvious who the murderer was. ;)

Date: 2012-09-10 02:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-lost-robot.livejournal.com
What a fantastic story! It kept me guessing to the end, I was so eager to find out who the real culprit was.

Date: 2012-09-10 09:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silberstreif.livejournal.com
Thanks! I tried to keep the readers guessing and there were really a few possibilities... for once I really wanted to keep the tension up until the very end. I have to admit, it's more fun to write a crime novel than anticipated by me.

Date: 2012-09-10 04:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluebirdsoaring.livejournal.com
Epic and amazing story!! You had me guessing until the very end as to the identity of the killer and how it was all going to work out!!

Date: 2012-09-10 09:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silberstreif.livejournal.com
Thanks for your review! It's wonderful to hear that you kept guessing, because if it would be obvious on the second part... well, the rest would've been kind of boring. ;)

Date: 2012-09-10 04:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pjlover666.livejournal.com
AHHHHHHH! What a story! WHAT A STORY! :D Ohh, the drama was epic! Prowl was epic, Jazz was epic! It was *all* EPIC.
It was painful I felt actual pain while reading this story (and not just this one!) Your drama is painful. But I love the pain - it addicting. Even when my heart is hurting for them and twisting in pain I can't stop reading! It's the most delicious kind of pain ever!
I would have never guessed who the killer would be. It was just..so.. lol. I suck at reading clues but hell, was this one mystery! There were TWO, not one, TWO killers! And I'm glad Jazz had a valid reason to do it...
And the ending? Thank you for the happy end! They deserve it so much, so so much! Now, I shall re-read it again. And again. And again, again....

Date: 2012-09-10 05:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silberstreif.livejournal.com
AAH! What a review! XD *hug* Really, you always manage to make me happy!
I hope it wasn't too painful for you. ;) But some pain is needed to keep the tension, and of course you mentioned it, the drama.
:D You don't suck. Your guesses were great to read, even though I couldn't say who it really was... but oh, how I wanted to! So far, no one has guessed right. And yes, no one. But they guessed ever other character in the story but Ironhide and Optimus - and Blip. Some even guessed Prowl. XD Well, some guessed Jazz as well, but I think most didn't want him to be the murderer of Tumbler and ignored the hints.
I had planned a good ending from the beginning... but that it was this happy was a surprise even for me. But I think I had written all drama out of me. ^-^
:D Reread it as often as you like!

Date: 2012-12-24 06:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skylar-matthews.livejournal.com
Well I finally got time to read a longer piece and it was great! Usually I'm pretty good at figuring out who the killer is (or maybe I just only pick books where it's obvious?) but I never even suspected Blip (nor Jazz, but I blame not wanting to think him the killer as my excuse there.) I loved the atmosphere of the whole thing but I think the epilogue is my absolute favorite part even though I did worry for a while there when Turnout called them out on the alibi.

All in all, beautiful story and I'm bummed it'll be days until I have time enough that I can read another.

Date: 2012-12-27 10:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silberstreif.livejournal.com
I'm happy that you liked it. :) It was my first try at a crime story and written within just two weeks... I'm happy that Blip wasn't obvious.
Yes, most didn't want to contemplate Jazz as the real killer. It was probably a huge distraction for most readers. ;)
The epilogue wasn't planned, funnily enough, it just happened. The story wanted it, and Turnout deserved a chance to shine at least for a second. (and of course, I'm a sucker for happy ends)

Thank you for commenting!

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